Dark, dark things dwell in the back of our minds,
some of the most sick and feared things in our lives:
darkness, secrets, horrifying memories that you try
to hold back but accompany you where ever you go.
***
This closet releases terrible things into your mind
that were never meant to be in this world; things
the mind can barely handle; the things that poison
and destroy your mind; dark things that savagely
suck out all the happiness and soul out of you until
you become nothing but a grim, useless pile of
waste, unable to think for yourself; unable to talk
with your own voice; unable to live with your self,
unable to live without horrifying things taking
control of you.
***
And by the time this closet is silenced, is when your
body lay deep beneath the Earth's surface decaying
and rotten, being eaten by maggots; when you are
long dead and the dark things are moved to another
human's mind, ready to destroy another's soul.
some of the most sick and feared things in our lives:
darkness, secrets, horrifying memories that you try
to hold back but accompany you where ever you go.
***
This closet releases terrible things into your mind
that were never meant to be in this world; things
the mind can barely handle; the things that poison
and destroy your mind; dark things that savagely
suck out all the happiness and soul out of you until
you become nothing but a grim, useless pile of
waste, unable to think for yourself; unable to talk
with your own voice; unable to live with your self,
unable to live without horrifying things taking
control of you.
***
And by the time this closet is silenced, is when your
body lay deep beneath the Earth's surface decaying
and rotten, being eaten by maggots; when you are
long dead and the dark things are moved to another
human's mind, ready to destroy another's soul.
9 comments:
minds;(on the first line)
listing darkness as a dark thing is a little pointless.
savagely is nice vocabulary, but in the wrong spot lol
the sentence in the second grouping is a tad long but very nice towards the end.
"And by the time this closet is silenced, is when your"
silenced, your
body is laying deep
and rotting. being eaten away
maggots.
either"have moved" or "are moving"
not my favorite of your work but it isnt bad keep working, please
yeah i wrote this a while ago and was probably just bored and started writing things. im not trying to cover anything like that i was stupider(i no not a real word) before than i am now, im just saying.
i though i replied to this already.............
yeah i understand lol and btw stupider is a word just not proper english =D
yea... thats confusing. lol to the stupider thing, he he he. ok im dun.
nvm im just saying if someone ever tells you its not a word tell them it is. its just letters put together right?
well, yeah, i gess.
=( nvm
lol, ok
ok, ok lol
Post a Comment